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- akabukowski
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- August 2, 2007
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2008-05-09 09:43:39.0
The morning of the first rehearsal, Jon rolled out of bed and knocked the vase on the bedside table onto...
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Posted: May 12, 08 6:43pm
The MacBook and Barnes & Noble references will seem either quaint or obscure in ten years. I would drop them.
Liz's abr...
Thanks, Dallas, very helpful.
Posted: May 12, 08 6:43pm
Otter, I liked this very much. I remember the first draft of this story...this one was more polished, more detailed (you...
TG - very helpful - thank you.