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Free Verse Poetry Twofer, Please Critique continued...

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2007-10-19 13:44:09.0

For me, free verse is not only the imagery of the words, but also how the line scans. Am I capturing...

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DeeCross

Posted: Oct 20, 07 7:08am

LanSr wrote:

For me, free verse is not only the imagery of the words, but also how the line scans. Am I capturing maximum meaning and...

LanSr your work here reminds me once again eyes may be the window to the soul but words are the window to our hearts. Well done, thanks for sharing and looking forward to more.

Kat, you paint this scene so well I doubt I can ever look at a pot of geraniums again without thinking of you and "Geraniums." I was so reminded of TS Eliot as I began to read. Give us more.

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Westerly

Posted: Oct 20, 07 11:06am

akabukowski wrote:

have no idea what one might call this flow of words. there are times when impressions leave me dizzy, breathless and th...

wow, Kat, this is so gorgeous!

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