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FLASH Event--ESCAPE--Feedback continued...

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2008-06-21 22:52:25.0

“Finally he’s asleep.” His body suddenly jerked, half-awakened by the bed as she moved to her side. ...

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TraumaGirl

Posted: Jun 23, 08 3:26pm

Hold your breath moments in flash? I didn't think it was possible and yet you pulled it off quite nicely!

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eve123

Posted: Jun 24, 08 10:20pm

I was on edge from the beginning. I was routing for the character before she ran with the dread of her getting caught. I very much enjoyed this. Exciting, stimulating and suspenseful...and I like the end.

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spiritedstrider

Posted: Jun 27, 08 6:47am

Lostmutt, Thank you. I'm glad I brought enjoyment to your day.

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spiritedstrider

Posted: Jun 27, 08 6:48am

TraumaGirl, Thanks for your feedback.--You can breathe now.

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spiritedstrider

Posted: Jun 27, 08 6:49am

Eve123, Thank you for commenting. I was hoping to give the feeling of being on the edge, so it was nice to see your comment.

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spiritedstrider

Posted: Jun 27, 08 6:51am

Westerly, I appreciate the feedback. Now if only I could use some of that adreneline to get to writing some more! Thanks!

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spiritedstrider

Posted: Jun 27, 08 6:52am

Otter, Thank you so much. Yes, it's only 5 miles, and so I have lots of mileage left to write more. :)

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