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- larrylambert
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- September 1, 2008
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From the original post:
2008-09-06 23:19:22.0
(Note: I would like all constructive criticism or
comment.)
One minute, Dana was doing...
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Posted: Sep 13, 08 9:06am
This definitely has it all. Jam packed story line, tons of emotion. Agree with MacLeod about getting into Dana's head, others about the formatting. Good effort.