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6-A, revised continued...

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2007-12-30 23:12:33.0

Okay, I've pounded on this thing until I can't see it anymore, so I need some perspective. What do you all...

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Posted: Dec 31, 07 5:23pm

KenWritez wrote:

Okay, I've pounded on this thing until I can't see it anymore, so I need some perspective. What do you all think about t...

I like this version the most. You've kept many of the details that drew me to the first version while tightening your grip on us readers in this third one.

Warm, real, physically & emotionally sensual. Nice use of organics to convey these sensibilities.

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CarolT

Posted: Dec 31, 07 6:12pm

KenWritez wrote:

Okay, I've pounded on this thing until I can't see it anymore, so I need some perspective. What do you all think about t...

By George, I think he's got it!

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