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Created:: June 18, 2008
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Theme: Joy and Pain continued...

From the original post:

2008-09-01 16:46:36.0

Use any words to express either or both of these. Same formula as always...5/7/5 syllables in three lines.

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OliviaHamilton

Posted: Oct 6, 08 10:39am

What's so great about

Seeing what's out there for you

I have pudding pops

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OliviaHamilton

Posted: Oct 6, 08 10:42am

I am not Mother

Turtle who laid you and left

I stuck around, right?

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Adelight

Posted: Oct 6, 08 11:08am

Pain? I know you well

You came many nights alone

to take me with you

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Suuse

Posted: Oct 8, 08 1:55pm

you held me so close

even now your scent lingers

on my soft black shirt

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eve123

Posted: Oct 8, 08 2:24pm

a whimper warns me

remain still, sad eyes seeking

pain quakes your body

soothing is a word

breathe easy comforting sleep

reassuring touch

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Angharad

Posted: Oct 8, 08 2:30pm

Suuse wrote:

you held me so close

even now your scent lingers

on my soft black shirt

Oh, Suuse, this is exquisite...strong and crystal clear.

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Suuse

Posted: Oct 11, 08 7:21pm

Angharad wrote:

Oh, Suuse, this is exquisite...strong and crystal clear.

I'm honoured. Thank you.

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