Posted: Oct 21, 07 5:45pm
On September 17th, I discovered the Writing Group at TeeBeeDee. After lurking awhile, I announced my presence to the much smaller group than exists today, and revealed that I would be taking MiltT up on his offer of a free Dove Bar to anyone who would come forward and begin posting on the site.
So...on September 24, 2007, I posted a story about a horse.
My calendar says today is October 21 - and still no Dove Bar. MiltT...I'll deal with you later. By the way,
my brother's a lawyer.
I also let it be known that anything I posted was ok to critique by anybody. That still goes for today with only one consideration...it must not start with the words, "Bmichael, you cretin....
Be nice, be considerate, be helpful, be professional, be a teacher, be a friend, or be silent and go post on one of those other groups that are concerned about hair dyeing and erection frequencies.
And guess what? It has been nice, considerate, helpful, professional, etc. to the credit of everyone in the group.
I've noticed that there is a wide variety of talent here, ranging from avid readers to students and teachers, from laymen to professionals, each offering, special insight, knowledge, and support...all real, and all for free! (Oh baby, oh baby!)
I continued to post, and receive critiques, both on and off line. They ranged from "Bmichael, it was a great story...I really liked it - will you marry me?... please, I want more"(my favorite!) to "Bmichael, you "eetincray" (huh?), have you ever heard of the term 'punctuation'? Have you ever wondered what those squiggly lines under words are for? Do you drink when you write?"
"Houston, we have a problem. We are now implanting the electrical shock device into Bmichael's head. Please advise Milt that his remote control panel is now operational and functioning properly. Stand by to deliver shock! Clear!"
"Ahem...Punctuation is everything in written language other than the actual letters or numbers, including punctuation marks, inter-word spaces, capitalization, and indentation."
"Wow! Did I say that?"
Remember...it's school, it's practice, it only counts if you get something out of it...use it!
I've heard folks say (or rather, read) that they're intimidated in some way about posting their work. Shut it! For one moment please, indulge me...I'm going to be the Writing Group (LanSr winces, MaryS faints)...
I dont know you personally...but
I'm pretty sure that you're much more than a pair of red shoes, a bridge in Boston, or a flying dog
Even if the picture is actually you, so what?
Tell me a story... that's why we're here...something that's special...important...yours.
I want to hear it, and if you want, I'll tell you what I think, and if not , I won't.
Tell it anyway...that's why we're here.
To write is wonderful...to be read is...
"...here you will find support, ideas, camaraderie. welcome! ...akabukowski"










