Posted: May 17, 08 7:23am
Bleed my heart
upon shattered sands
of windswept glass
ending in silence.
If time were right
and motion lost,
I might find myself
in a landscape of dreaming,
sweet, yet soundless.
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Posted: May 17, 08 7:56pm
Bleed my heart
upon shattered sands
of windswept glass
ending in silence.
If time were right
and motion lost,
I mi...
Henry, this is beauty in motion...lovely imagry and depth.
kristylove
Posted: May 29, 08 7:58pm
what a nice poem
Posted: May 30, 08 3:07pm
Why, thank you, ladies. I am touched.
Posted: May 30, 08 7:22pm
Hi, henry. Thanks for posting that poem.
Posted: May 31, 08 11:00am
very melancholy and evocative. nice.
Posted: May 31, 08 11:34am
Once again, my thanks. You are all, every one of you, too kind.
DavidKim
Posted: Jun 9, 08 6:14pm
Best of the best. Bravo Henry. Loved it.
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