Posted: Sep 6, 08 6:16pm
The nurse draws my blood --
A wish fulfilled for strangers
With coffee after.
COMMENT

How many strangers?
Would there be two plus the nurse?
Coffee AND fresh juice?
carol,inspirational!
beautiful and flower is right...inspirational.
very nice, a complete "essay" in three lines. sweet.

How many strangers?
Would there be two plus the nurse?
Coffee AND fresh juice?

I count three strangers --
Recipient, nurse, and me.
No juice, just coffee.

The nurse draws my blood --
A wish fulfilled for strangers
With coffee after.

CarolT,
Another winner for short and on target!
Thanks for being here. :-)
(I'm the blood drive coordinator at my business, so this gets my blue ribbon.)
Very nice Carol. Short and to the point.
I was regular blood donor back in Bulgaria, so I can relate to this.
No one wants my poisoned blood anymore /hepatitis A/.
