Before you re-submit this story, please do your editing and make paragraphs. I am sorry, I cannot read a run-on, single paragraph story unless it was written that way for a reason and this one was not. Paragraphing separates your ideas and allows the reader to know what the writer intended as to pacing and separation of ideas.

Ditto! It's a sweet memoir, but marred by incorrect and inconsistent capitalization. The lack of paragraphs makes it very hard to read.

Looking forward to the re-submission!

-M