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Created:: June 18, 2008
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Silver and Butterfly

Posted: Jun 30, 08 8:15am

Silver Butterfly. . . The name of the scent of the hand cream, which someone gave me for Christmas, and which is sitting next to my computer. I keep seeing it, and I thought the words might generate some interesting Haiku.

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Angharad

Posted: Jun 30, 08 8:32am

Fragile butterfly.

Wings grazing pink peony

leave a silver smudge.

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Mairi

Posted: Jun 30, 08 8:36am

Tiny silver bells

Tinkling like wee butterflies

Dancing in my ear

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Mairi

Posted: Jun 30, 08 8:39am

Angharad wrote:

Fragile butterfly.

Wings grazing a peony

leave a silver smudge.

I think your haiku is truly beautiful. I can see it so clearly!

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Angharad

Posted: Jun 30, 08 12:24pm

Thanks, Mairi. Ditto for you!

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DannyO

Posted: Jun 30, 08 5:25pm

Black hair, long and straight

Silver butterfly barrette

She still haunts my dreams

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DannyO

Posted: Jun 30, 08 5:32pm

Silver Butterfly

The name of a hand cream scent

I keep seeing it

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At my computer

A memorable present

I keep seeing it

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spuff

Posted: Jun 30, 08 5:47pm

very sweet dannyO

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