Posted: Aug 10, 08 3:59am
And every possible form of the words. For haiku newbies, the formula is 3 lines of 5/7/5 syllables, respectively.
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Posted: Aug 10, 08 4:32am
At the bagel shop
I hope it's not a long wait
Coffee not ready
Posted: Aug 10, 08 4:35am
their son is crowning
joy and hope outshine the pain
they hold hands and wait
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hope for the future
sweet jumble of love and pink
we await your smile...
Posted: Aug 10, 08 4:44am
Coffee not ready
I hope it's not a long wait
At the bagel shop
[Are you a cream cheese kinda guy, Danny, or do you take 'em straight up?]
cream cheese, onion, lox
hoping for chewy goodness
waiting for bagels
Posted: Aug 10, 08 4:47am
[Are you a cream cheese kinda guy, Danny, or do you take 'em straight up?]
Cream cheese, lox, capers
Why do some folks use butter?
Bagels are not rolls
Posted: Aug 10, 08 4:55am
Cream cheese, lox, capers
Why do some folks use butter?
Bagels are not rolls
Mmmmmmmmmmm, capers [sounding like Homer Simpson and drooling...].
Posted: Aug 10, 08 5:31am
Your words give me hope
for everlasting love, dear
how long will I wait?
Posted: Aug 10, 08 6:37am
Your words give me hope
for everlasting love, dear
how long will I wait?
Coffee is ready
Eternal love takes longer
Please pass the sugar
While we eat breakfast
Our love story grows longer
Then we sleep again
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